I'm a Rubiks cube.
If invested
Time and effort,
Solving me
Wouldn't be so hard.
Each individual cube,
Each piece
Of me
Supported
From the core.
I have a one track mind;
The possibilites
Are endless,
Yet I stick
To just one.
To the untrained eye,
Multiple sides of me
Are hidden.
The poem was hard to follow for me. How is it easy to solve you? The rest after that part was good
ReplyDeleteSorry, Ru, but I disagree with you :P I think you're trying to say that you're not easy to solve unless time and effort is put on you, yes? But besides that, I really liked the core thing, although you should make it longer. It seems interesting :3
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