No matter what year it is, the 4th
of July was always exciting and fun when you were with my family. I remember
one year where my cousin Noah and I took some smoke bombs and rolled them under
police cars. The bright smoke slowly seeped out of the small, colorful sphere;
the air thick and filled with laughter.
Both of us cackling, we ran back to my uncle’s house; the smell of my
father’s kal bi was wafting through the air. We looked at each other with delight
as we raced to the kitchen, letting nothing stand in our way.
“Whatcha making, Daddy?” I asked.
“Kal bi. But don’t tell anyone,
it’s a secret!” he tittered.
We nodded
yes and giggled as we headed back to the living room. All of my cousins were
staring blankly at the television with no idea of what was to come. Noah turned toward me and we both nodded
knowingly. The best part of the night was almost here.
Ever since
I was a little girl, I can remember sitting on the couch and watching
television on the night of Independence Day. It was the exact same thing every
year. The strong aroma of ginger and green onions would make its’ way toward
me, luring me into the kitchen. For the
duration of the afternoon, I heard the sound of chopping knives and sizzling
pots. When the major components of this main course were ready, my parents
would pack them into the car and drive over to my uncle’s house. I’d greet my
cousins in a warm and friendly manner, ecstatic to see them again.
While the
adults unpacked the car and set up in the kitchen, my cousins and I would play
with the sparklers and fireworks, lighting up the dark night sky with vibrant
explosions. Walking back to the house for a snack, I would sometimes peek into
the kitchen where my uncle Mike was helping my dad out. Laughing gleefully, I
would watch as they cut green onions with accuracy. As if they were dancing
around the kitchen, they took each pan of marinated meat and sauce and placed
them in the oven.
Excitedly,
I burst out the door to where all the other kids were. “My Daddy’s almost done
with the kal bi!” I’d exclaim. Each of my cousins turned to each other with a
thrilled gleam in their eyes as I’d lead the way back to the house. Marching
into the house, we’d all find a place on the huge couch my uncle owned and wait
intently for the satisfactory “ding” of the oven. Too focused on the television, the ding went
unheard. Sighs of happiness were faintly heard from the kitchen. The padding of
feet gradually got louder; smiles lit up the room as the foot was brought to
the table.
My Dad’s recipe:
-
kal bi sauce (the components of this are a
secret, sorry L)
-
fresh green onions/scallions
-
fresh ginger
-
garlic
-
sesame seeds
-
sesame oil
-
meat
"As the foot was brought to the table"... I can only hope that your family doesn't practice cannibalism, because that's typically frowned upon in society. Just kidding, haha. Your descriptions of your relatives and the celebration was just simply phenomenal. The similes and the mischievousness of you and your cousin, Noah (Is he the one who bakes the cupcakes?) is just LOL worthy. Overall, I loved it.
ReplyDeleteYou have some really good detail. However, you need to read over your essay because you have a confusing story line. You start with being at your uncles house with your cousin then you race inside and your dad is cooking. Then you are going to your uncles house again. You also say how you remember the night of independence day, then go on to talk about the afternoon of your dad cooking kalbi.
ReplyDeleteAlso you are missing that personal connection, why do you love it so much, besides its taste. Does it have more meaning behind it. Does he only cook it for the 4th of July.
Read over your essay to make sure your timeline of stories all make sense and add more personal connection to it.